2008年1月30日水曜日

Sugg's for Successor

First, it is important to write many things, because I can't write many things and long. So, I want to write like that. To write many things is good practice to write in English.
Second, it is important to include many media or links on own blog, because it is very good to see for other students. Also, it is very particular to include media or links.
Third, you should to write on time. For example, essay or book review. Also, it is good things for you to read books in English, because it make your English skills. Also, it is fan to read many English books.
These three steps are important for me [114 words]

2008年1月16日水曜日

About typing

I don't like typing, because I am poor at typing. However, I have a much time to typing in English, so I practiced much time to typing. Now, I like typing in English. Also, first time, I could’t typing smoothly and fast that I want to write in English. However, I can typing that I want to write things in English. Also, I want to typing very fast and smoothly in the future. So, I am practicing typing in English now. It is difficult for me to typing very fast. Also, it is difficult for me to typing much things in English that I want to write things. However, it is very cool to typing very fast. [117 words]

2008年1月15日火曜日

Tired↓↓

Today I was very tired, because yesterday, coming of age day. So, I wore Kimono. Also, I had a alumni meeting of junior high school. After alumni meeting, we went to Japanese bar near the grand HIGO. [37 words]

Coming of age day!!

Today is coming of age day. I wore Kimono today, so I was very tired, because kimono is very heavy. I don't want to wear kimono. I met a lot of friends today, so I was very happy♥ I took a lot of pictures with my old friends.
After ceremony, I had alumni meeting of junior high school at the grand HIGO. then, I met old many friends.

2008年1月13日日曜日

shopping

I went to kurea with my parents.
Also, we ate lunch there.
We went to many shops at there. Then, I bought a comb for coming of age day. [29 words]

2008年1月10日木曜日

TEST

Today, I have a test of speaking.
I was a very nervous, because I am poor at speaking English. I spoke English with my class mate. [26 words]

Dinner

I went to yume town with Kanako. We went to there by a car. Kanako drove a car.
Then, we went to Pietro. we ate pasta. I like pasta very much.

2008年1月9日水曜日

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Student ID: 06159
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
3
2
3
8
8
24


Blog posts 0
5
10
14
28
2
59

Words 0
244
853
1486
2971
483
6037


TOTAL
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244
853
1486
2971
483
6037
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12
Mega essay
2008.01.08
5
225
0
0
0
0

Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26
My favorite place
2007.10.26
5
200
0
0
0
0

Movie
review
07.11.11
Toy Story 1
2007.11.213
304
0
0
0
0

Community
life
07.11.25
Community Life
2007.11.25
5
315
0
0
0
0

TV in
Japan
07.12.09
TV programs
2007.12.06
0
337
0
0
0
0

Learning w/
computers
07.12.21
Learning with computers
2007.12.20
13
786
0
0
0
0





















Totals---
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [My best essay is "Learning with computers", because I could write long and particulars and I could write that I thought about this semester's writing IV. However, I shoulded to include media or links.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
WoW! Get a Load of These Demographics
2007.12.11
18
So so
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*To learn computer
2008.01.09
18
So so
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
learning with computers
2007.12.19
25
Good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*




2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
learning with computers
2007.12.19
25
Good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.12.19
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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24
So so





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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • ... Yes, I do. I have it in a sidebar.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [nothing]

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
71
2007.11.07
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
122
2007.12.19
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
51
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 109

2007.11.21

2007.12.05

2007.12.19




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Marcel and the mona lisa
07.09.26
28
0
2-02
The Leopard And The Lighthouse
07.09.26
56
0
2-03
Billy and the Queen
07.09.30
21
0
2-04
The House Of The Seven Gables
07.10.25
39
0
2-05
Rip Van Winkle and the Legend of sleepy Hollow
07.10.25
103
0
2-06
Twenty Thousand Leagues UnderThe Sea
07.11.28
107
0
2-07
Amazon Rally
07.11.29
163
0
2-08
Photo Finish
07.11.29
184
0
2-09
Star Report
07.12.03
83
0
2-10
Titanic
07.12.05
113
0
2-11
Diana
07.12.11
200
0
2-12
Kings and Queens of Britain
07.12.12
128
0
2-13
Taxi of Terror
07.12.13
75
0
2-14
The White Stone
07.12.14
127
0
2-15
Carnival
07.12.20
67
0
2-16
Oranges in the snow
07.12.23
57
0
2-17
King Arthur
08.01.07
55
0
2-18
Richard Curtis
08.01.07
99
0










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TOTALS:
1705
0
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [My best book review is Diana, because I like Diana so I can wrote many things about Diana and I could know new things about Diana to read this book. ]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
0

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? 0

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? 0

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

0

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?0

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
0

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
0

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
0

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
0

  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
0

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? 0

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • __4_ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • Boring (3)
    • Club (2)
    • Family (3)
    • Part-time-job (1)
    • ...
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? 0

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
0

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • __26_ posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
0
  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
0
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ...
  2. ...
  3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...They should to include media or links much more on their blogs.

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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2008年1月8日火曜日

Mega Essay

I live in kumamoto. There are a lot of famous places and many special products in Kumamoto. Kumamoto is prefecture in Japan. Summer is very hot and humid. Let me introduce Kumamoto's famous places.

There is a castle in Kumamoto. Kumamoto castle is a center of Kumamoto. This castle's name is Kumamoto castle.
It's 400 years that Kumamoto castle was built. Kumamoto castle is well known stone wall. It is very sharp. Kumamoto castle was built by Kiyomasa Kato. Next, That is Suizenji park. It is very beautiful garden. Suizenji park is a nationally famous place. It place was bed of Tadanori Hosokawa.

Last, I want to introduce Mt.Aso. Mt. Aso has a big caldera. When I have been to there, I was very surprised, because it was very beautiful!! I was very impressed. You should to go to Mt. Aso to see caldera.


Also, Kumamoto has a soccer team. This soccer team's name is Rosso. Rosso's image color is red, Rosso's image is horse.
I support our's local soccer team. Rosso is aiming at J league.

Kumamoto's special product is basashi, karashirenkon, watermelon, ikinaridango. Basashi is horse.
I like basashi. It taste is very delicious!! I eat basashi at time. Basashi is famous food. Karashirenkon get mustard and miso into lotus root. It is a bit fiery. Karashirenkon is local dishes in Kumamoto. It is good chewy. Watermelon of Ueki in Kumamoto is famous It is very sweet, but I don't like it. Ikinaridango get sweet potato into dango. It is very good taste.
[225 words]
Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
3
2
3





Blog posts 0
5
10
14





Words 0








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2008年1月7日月曜日

richard curtis

This story was very long, so it was very difficult for me to read this book. However, this story was interesting. Peter and Juliet are getting married, but not everyone is so happy. Jamie loses his girlfriend. Mark is in love with a girl who will never be his. Sarah's love for her brother makes it difficult for her to find a boyfriend. Herry's love for his wife, Karen, is going to be tested by a beautiful new employee. Daniel's wife has just died. Billy Mack, the ageing rock star, is alone after a lifetime of singing about love. [99 words]

KING ARTHUR

This book is form of manga. It is the year 650 in England. There is war everywhere, because the old king is dead and he has no son. When the new king comes can the fighting stop and the strange. First, Merlin the ancient magician has to find a way of finding the next king. [55 words]

2008年1月6日日曜日

SUSHI

I ate Sushi with my boyfriend today.
We went to Otarukou. However we waited a long time there, because there were many people.
I like Sushi very much. Especially, I like tuna and salmon.
It was very delicious!! So, we contented to eat it♥ [45 words]

2008年1月2日水曜日

My grand mother

My grand mother came to my house today. She's name is Ikue.
Now, there is her in the hospital, but she could to come to my house today, so I was very happy☺Because I didn't meet her for the long time. I talked her about many things today!! [48 words]

2008年1月1日火曜日

♥A Happy New Year♥

Start to 2008!!
I hope that this year is happy year☺ [11 words]